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1. Put yourself in place of one of the boys who escaped the crash but was forced to watch "helplessly as Rob died." What is going through your head? How do you feel physically and mentally? How do you think that you will feel tomorrow?

1. If I were one of the boys that escaped the crash but had to watch R__ob__ helplessly burn to death.I would feel sick and be sorry and feel r__esponsable__ for R__obs__ death because I was drinking.I think phsically __i__ would feel worn out and beaten up from watching my friend die.I would feel helpless mentally and feel like not doing anything.I think that tomorrow I would feel like not getting up.

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2. When you hear or read of a car accident that involved teenagers, what do you tend to assume was the cause of the accident? What about if you hear about an accident involving the elderly? Explain your answers.

2. If I __heard__ of an accident involving teenagers __I__ would think it was drinking.I think this because when your in your late teens you think you __un__stopable and drinking and driving is no problem.If I __heard__ of a car accident __involving__ elderly __mabe there__ eyesight __wasn't__ able to tell road from ditch or the road being slippery from ice or snow. But it should be a reasonable excuse because they know the risk of drinking and __driveing__ and they have alot of experience with __driveing.__

7. In his homework assigment, Gerald writes that he would rid the world of 3 things. What 3 things would you rid the world of? Stick to concrete items, and back up your choices with personal reasons why you are eliminating them.

7. The three things that I __woulds__ get rid of __is__ all drugs because they do no good .I also would get rid of __ciggrates__ because they only kill people and cause cancer. The last thing that __i__ would get rid of is __alachol because__ all it does is shut down organs and cause wrecks and get people in trouble.

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8. Neither of Andy's parents bother to show up for the game. How important is it for you that your parents turn out for the events in which you participate? Explain.

8. I think that it is important if your parents show up for your event to show that they care about you and so they can see your __accomplashments__.they need to show up to show their kid that they care and that they support them.

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10. Andy mentions that some kids at school haven't looked him in the face since the acident;one even taped a mean note to is locker. How would you treat Andy now? Elaborate.

10. I would treat __andy__ with sorrow and respect because he had to go through alot with the wreck.It would also be hard for him to lose his friend and he was also drinking in the car so he __probibialy__ felt guilty.

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11.Does doing homework help you to perform better on tests? Does homework seem purposeful to you, or is it basically a waste of time? What alternate do you suggest? Defend your answer. 11. I believe that homework __isnt__ a waste of time if it is over the same material that is on the test.I think that if we had a study guide for the test it would help __up__.I think this because we could find the answers for the study guide them we could __study__ for the test.

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14. We learn about Andy's grades and study habits. Do you think the guidance counselor who advised him against pre-law was being realistic or unfair? Defend your answer.

14. I think that he was being realistic because with his basket ball he wouldnt have the time to go to law school and attend all the activities that are included in the law school.

16. Andy envisions that Monty will have a future as a lawyer or a doctor. But when he thinks of his own future, he sees a blank or darkness. Can you picture who you will be in 15 years? What do you envision for your future?

16. I think that in 15 years I will be done with all my schooling and college and move somewere were there is a good job. One of the jobs that I am considering is something to do with wildlife.