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7. In his homework assigment, Gerald writes that he would rid the world of 3 things. What 3 things would you rid the world of? Stick to concrete items, and back up your choices with personal reasons why you are eliminating them 7. I would get __rid__ of spiders,splinters,and peppers. I would get __rid__ of spiders because i hate them they __have__ to many legs and they are always every where. I would get ride of splinters because they always get in my feet when I walk around.I am not the biggest fan of peppers I do not like a lot of kinds of peppers.

TB - Go back and correct __mispelled words__ You did not give a good explanation of each item or a closing sentence. REDO

10. Andy mentions that some kids at school haven't looked him in the face since the acident;one even taped a mean note to is locker. How would you treat Andy now? Elaborate 10. I would be nice to him.Just because he was there the night he died does not make him a killer or anything they wont give him a chance to tell them how bad he feels with all that he's been through.

TB - You did not restate the prompt This is a run-on sentence REDO

12. Do you feel that your parents 'get' you or don't understand you at all? What makes you think this? Explain

12. Yes, When my parents dont give me any room to speak about my side of the story.

TB - This needs a better expnanation REDO

1. Put yourself in place of one of the boys who escaped the crash but was forced to watch "helplessly as Rob died." What is going through your head? How do you feel physically and mentally? How do you think that you will feel tomorrow?

1.I would be thinking why did he have to die why couldnt he live to. Physically I would be trying to get to him and save him mentally I would think of how to get to him and why he was the one that was still stuck in the car. The next day i probably wouldn't leave my room I would stay in there for a while.

16. Andy envisions that Monty will have a future as a lawyer or a doctor. But when he thinks of his own future, he sees a blank or darkness. Can you picture who you will be in 15 years? What do you envision for your future?\

16.I see my self in a vets office i would like to be a vet so thats were I see myself in 15 years.